I haven't listened to the original, but I sure like this music. I don't think it's a fail, although I never listened to the original.
This music is boring and repetitive. You should try making it less repetitive. Sorry man, but you really should try harder.
Kinda repetitive even for a loop in my opinion but it is a nice sounding loop like what you attempted. This music would be suitable for a scene in a game, or maybe an art game.
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